Chapter 2 – Madness

EPOV

A swath of cloth.

White cotton.

White cotton dotted with little drops of red.

It wrapped itself around me. Hugging me. Smothering me from the inside out. Filling my head until it was near bursting. Such a cold and sterile hue stood out in a sea of darkness and yet it felt warm.

Golden.

Sun kissed.

And it was sweet?

“Not especially.”

There it was again. The voice haunting my dreams. I shook my head to rid my ears of the sound, but like always, it never truly left. Be it in the form of a whisper. A tinkling laugh. A sigh of ecstasy.

An indignant huff.

I could not turn it off no matter how it chose to reveal itself.

But still I tried. My mind worked to call upon another dream. Was it a dream? Something told me no. The word precognition came to mind instead.

It was interesting.

“Did the psychic think so?”

There she was again. The haughtiness of her tone led me to believe she did not like to share my attentions. Even if it were only within the confines of my addled mind. But I already knew I could not deny her wishes. I could not control her hold over me.

I could not control her.

Night after night my mind was under her spell. At her command and at her mercy. Some nights she was angry with me and would fling accusations like a boomerang. Throw it with perfect precision, so that it would leave its mark on my soul. And then catch it upon its return only so she could repeat the process all over again.

“You don’t seem too happy about something.”

No. No, I wasn’t happy at all. Even the word itself seemed foreign to my mind.

“Would there be something wrong with me rescuing the two of you?”

Yes?

No?

My mind couldn’t decide on which stance to take. Nor could it discern a third party within my nightmare for her words to make sense.

“Where do you get off, telling them that I’m your…your lover?”

The obvious distaste in her tone laced with her anger forced a grunt from my chest as her verbal barb sliced through my skin. But I welcomed the pain. Physical discomfort was less cumbersome than the emotional turmoil her words were capable of conjuring.

Perhaps the other she spoke of was her true lover?

The thought provoked another painful hiss from my lips. One I wished I could bestow on the one she was spoken for. Because even her anger could not dissuade the hold she had on me. I welcomed her presence in any form.

“Why?” she cried out. “He actually came to rescue me. Why get mad at him?”

My back arched in agony hearing the hurt in her voice as she beseeched, “Where were you?”

I had no answer for her question. All I knew was the darkness of my mind. Her voice my only rudder, steering me in whichever direction she wanted me to go. I attempted once more to call up her image. To make out the distinct features blurred out by the light that always accompanied her form whenever I tried. But it was impossible.

It was like trying to stare directly into the sun.

“I hoped you would come,” she cried brokenly. “I prayed you would come. I thought over and over you might hear me.”

She was killing me with nothing more than her words.

I hear you now. I am here for you now. We are broken together.

Perhaps that would be enough.

And just as her words were capable of inflicting agony, so too were they able to soothe my pain. Ease the never ending ache in my chest. Alleviate the perpetual soreness in my limbs. My body. My soul.

“Oh, Eric.”

Her soft spoken words were no longer broken. Instead they evoked a sense of tenderness. Pity too, perhaps. But I didn’t care. I would gladly take her pity over her hurtful accusations.

“Eric, I’ll do my best to keep you safe.”

Safe.

Another word just as foreign to me. And as if to remind me I could not trust her promises, another groan escaped my lips as the burning sensation sliced through my thigh.

“Come on,” she called out into the darkness, pulling me back from the pain and replacing it with a new sensation. Not one of burning but of warmth as it encased my hand. It lit up in my chest and shone brightly in my mind. Its light burning away the lingering pain in my body, so I focused on my indistinguishable savior trying to recall her name.

“Sookie,” she whispered back to me. “Sookie Stackhouse.”

Thank you, Sookie.

I settled in beside her in my mind. I needed the break, but a sweetness hit my tongue then. Its flavor familiar, but obscured from my memories. Its effect instantaneous. My already addled brain churned like a hurricane trying to place it. A snarl worked its way from my chest, knowing despite its memorable essence it was all wrong.

Exquisite, but wrong.

But I was rendered powerless. Like the angelic voice of my conscience, my body was no longer my own to control. I knew it and yet I still fought. I fought to regain the upper hand. Waged war with myself because if I could not silence her voice, I should at least be able to manage my body’s reactions.

The futility of my actions was not foreign to me. It was ingrained in me. No matter how much I wanted to make it stop – to get away – it was a compulsion I could not resist.

But perhaps sensing my hopelessness, my Northern Star named Sookie chose to once again make her presence known. In the state I was in, I wasn’t sure which side she would choose to grace me with. Her temper flared just as easily as her passion.

“Excuse me… I didn’t mean to walk in on you. I should have knocked.”

Her hesitant words mirrored the shyness I could feel coming from her as if it were my own. Caution. Uncertainty. They oozed from her and straight through my veins just as much as her undeniable lust.

Never, lover. You never have to apologize for that.

“Yes, but intruding wasn’t polite.”

This side of her was always sweet. Exquisitely so.

My mind was racing now with another part of my body experiencing a different kind of pain. A throbbing need that could only be relieved in one way. Sensations of standing in the midst of a rainfall besieged my mind, while memories of something soft and supple ghosted under my palms.

Another sensation made itself known then – rougher than I had expected it to be – and trailed across my chest. Simultaneously familiar and foreign, but already caught up in my favorite dream, I repeated the words I knew should come next.

“Bite a little.”

A sharp pain drew another hiss from my lips as the pain worked its way through my chest and through my psyche. No longer sweet. No longer gentle.

Nothing but a raw brutality.

It was all wrong. It was nothing like my dreams. Nothing like how I knew my unseen lover to be, but my body was its own. It reacted to the physical stimulation on primal instinct and while I could not control it, I could recognize when another foreign presence entered my now unfamiliar dream. As my body shuddered uncontrollably with my release, I intuitively bit down on the skin shoved into my mouth. But instead of swallowing the cool liquid that followed, I spat out the unsavory flavor that had been forced onto my palate.

There was nothing exquisite about it.

Instead it was rank with desperation.

Entitlement.

And now, defeat.

My head snapped to the left when she backhanded me for refusing to take her blood yet again. And since they pissed her off so much, I repeated my actions and spit out the newest bit of blood tainting my tongue, caused by her own actions when my fangs tore through her skin. As her royal consort our blood was not shared as a part of our ceremony, like it was when I officiated between Mississippi and Indiana. The sharing of each other’s blood would give us equal power over one another. Something only her equal would be worthy of. But in the eyes of my queen and the rest of the supernatural world, I was less than. It was why she’d been trying to force her blood into me ever since. To have some sort of power over me.

She should have negotiated a better contract.

One of its only redeeming qualities was that it forced my mind to focus and it cleansed my palate of the small amount of fairy blood she’d fed me. It was only a drop, but it was her latest ploy to get me to submit. Hoping my high induced fucking, coupled with my erratic feedings and lack of rest, would be my undoing.

If that was her A-game, she didn’t stand a chance.

The only thing it did was bring an end to the downtime thoughts my mind had retreated to. Had always run to whenever she chose to play her games. Sometimes I was able to direct my thoughts on my own. To choose which memory I wanted to relive. But other times, more so when she drew out our play dates into days’ long sessions where I would be kept awake by her Were guards while she was forced to her daytime rest, my mind would retreat on its own. Always to the same place. Always to the same one. But it was always a tossup on how I would be received by her.

Sookie – my teaser or my tormentor. They were one and the same.

Once I knew she was safe and I was forced to move to Oklahoma, I tested my chains. My only saving grace was that unlike Ocella, she couldn’t command me to do anything. Freyda could say the words, of course, but it was my choice to follow her orders. She had chosen me because of my age and my strength.

She should have thought that through.

To automatically simper at her feet wasn’t something I would do nor would it be expected. In order for me to gain the upper hand, I would have to test her. To make her retaliate and beat me into submission – much like my maker – before giving her the small and subtle signs it was working. Allow her to believe she was breaking me – had broken me – and then let her build me back up as being completely loyal to her. It was the only way for her to not question my fealty. I needed her to believe I would be loyal to her above all others and when she did, I would take her undead life.

And I would be king.

It wasn’t something I wanted before now. I still didn’t want it even now, but I was done with having to answer to anyone. Done with having my life dictated to me. Without a maker and without a liege, I would be free to do as I wished.

Just as Sookie had been free to do as she wished.

I had spies in Oklahoma’s court. Ones who would fill me in on the life I’d left behind. With one child as sheriff of the area she lived in and my other outside her house every night, I knew everything Sookie had been up to. And who she’d been up to it with.

Fucking shifter.

While the thought of his filthy paws on her voluptuous skin galled me, at least he was far enough removed from the supernatural world for her to maintain some sort of normalcy. The normal human life I had always known she’d craved.

The kind of life I could never give her.

And by becoming king I knew it would forever seal my fate in her eyes. Knew more than ever she wanted no part of my ‘vampire shit’ and I couldn’t blame her. Our vampire shit is what had turned her life upside down. Cost her nothing but pain and misery.

So perhaps my first order of business as king would be to have Compton brought before me so I could stake his antebellum ass.

Now, however, I was forced to acknowledge the one in front of me. A stake would be too quick of a way for her to die, so my mind moved on from sweet little telepaths and sideburn wearing cocksuckers to the bitch who would meet her end by my hand.

“Who do you owe fealty to, Eric?”

The sound of her voice was like tiny strands of silver feathering over my balls. Something she had not yet thought of because her imagination was pitiful. While there was a reason why she’d risen to the station of queen at such a relatively young age, there was no amount of sadism she could subject me to that my own maker hadn’t prepared me for. Nor could she hide her insecurities from me.

Timorous cunt.

Undoubtedly it was why I was brought here to begin with. She needed a warrior at her side in order to keep her throne before others figured out she would be easily overthrown. I could effortlessly rip her head from her shoulders now if my arms weren’t shackled in silver to the ceiling above me.

Because although a timorous cunt, she would not have become queen by being stupid as well.

It was a game we played. One that had lasted on and off over the last eleven months. But it would not last forever. Not even over the next two centuries.

No. I would not last that long.

But I would not overreact either. I needed to bide my time. To learn who could be trusted and who could not. To see for myself just how far her reach went and then work twice as hard to make sure my own doubled her span. Ocella might have sold me out. Taken my life from me once again from beyond the grave, but that very same grave meant I did not have to be anyone’s puppet. Not for long anyways.

The silver tipped whip sliced through the air and sliced through my skin when I didn’t answer her highness in an expedient manner.

“Royal consort!” she snapped, attempting to remind me of my place, but only succeeded in reminding me why I would not rest until I wore her entrails like Pam wore her Burberry scarves. And when that same thought also reminded me I missed my children as well, thanks to my queen, I decided then and there I would be sure to gift each of them with one of her fangs.

Who do you owe fealty to?”

“Sophie-Anne?”

My throat was dry, so my words came out in a hoarse gruff. I had been denied any rest for days and only been fed occasional sips of synthetic blood. My body was weak from the silver restraining me and the numerous wounds covering my body were healing much slower because of it. They were not caused by Sookie’s words in my dreams, but in actuality had been by Freyda’s hand. However my words succeeded in leaving their mark on her given her livid expression.

Sophie-Anne was a devious bitch, but she’d at least deserved having her own kingdom.

So Freyda reminded me of my place by leaving another mark on my skin with her whip, repeating, “Who do you owe fealty to?”

“Count Chocula?”

Sookie had thought it hilarious to leave a box of the sugared cereal at my house for when she visited, telling me I wasn’t the only vampire she put in her mouth.

Fuck, I missed her.

I tried to forget her. As soon as she rescinded my invitation from her house, I returned to Shreveport telling myself I was done with her for good. That she didn’t love me enough to even try and see that I only asked her to be my mistress because I loved her – and would’ve spent the rest of her days loving her – told me I needed to forget about her.

Ironically, now it was only because of my memories of her that I had somewhere warm – if not sometimes hostile – to retreat to in my mind.

And I smiled, practically able to hear the snort Sookie would’ve made at my swearing allegiance to Count Chocula.

“You think this is funny?” my soon to be ex-wife screeched.

The one who came before her had prepared me for that reaction as well. And while my former lover could be infuriatingly stubborn and irrational, she at least made it worth the effort.

This one was worth at most a pitiful three grand street value, if I made the effort to drain her blood into tiny vials and sold it off to the dregs of society.

It would be too much effort for me.

Pam though. She would happily do it.

Freyda came at me with a silver dagger and from the angle she maintained I would’ve guessed she was aiming to make my smile a more permanent one by carving it into my face. I was restrained and already weakened, so there was nothing I could do to stop her. But her second in command stepped forward and halted her progression, saying, “He’s already lost too much blood. You shouldn’t weaken him any further.”

“He should learn to obey me!” she shouted.

“You need him to remain strong, my queen. As he is now, he would be of no use to you if we were to come under attack.” Pausing long enough for the rationale to take hold, he added, “He will honor his contract. You know this.”

Ah yes, the contract.

My maker was dead so there would be no vengeance for me there. For my queen I already had compiled a long list of ways in which I would exact my revenge. But there was still another. One more vampire on my vampire shit list.

Felipe de Castro.

He could have stopped it all. Without my maker to command me, as my king he could have denied Freyda’s request to have me honor any promises made to her by Ocella. I was his sheriff. I lived in his territory and had sworn my fealty to him. There would’ve been nothing she could do about it.

But he sold me out instead. And I knew it wasn’t for money or territory. By agreeing to Freyda’s request he gained the one thing he would never be able to get ahold of with me there.

Sookie Stackhouse.

I knew the moment he felt safe. The moment he heard through the ever present supernatural grapevine that I had fully submitted to Freyda, he would make his move. Contractually bound to stay away from her or not, there was no court who would uphold it. Any of them would want their very own telepath and many were likely making plans to acquire one.

One who was living with a fucking shifter and likely making a litter of puppies at that very moment.

But it was what she wanted. What I could never give her. So I would be graceful and bow out.

But I would take out every ounce of my hostility on Felipe’s hide. Once I overthrew Freyda and Oklahoma was mine, he would be the next one in my sights. And when he fell and Louisiana became mine, then Sookie could spend the rest of her days with a pup on each teat if that was what she wanted.

“Will you?”

My balls tightened once more, feeling the imaginary sting of silver gliding over them, as her voice glided back into my consciousness.

“Will you honor our contract?”

“Of course, my queen,” I replied, throwing her a bone. One she didn’t need fairy blood to get from me.

Unless there was a connection by blood, vampires having sex together was unnatural. We did it from time to time, but not on a regular basis. It was why nearly every marriage contract specified it only had to be done once a year. Likely to reestablish the by then weakening blood tie formed at the ceremony. Small amounts taken over the span of a year would not complete a blood bond.

Freyda’s only motivations in fairy fucking me had been to get her blood into me. And perhaps it was also retribution for me fucking her favored pets upon my arrival in her palace until they preferred me over her.

I’d held out hope in the days following our public divorce Sookie would come to see reason. Hoped once I calmed down that she would as well. That her hurt and anger would subside so that she would see I’d had no choice. In the previous three years she’d come to the rescue of many vampires she both knew and didn’t know. Myself included. So in those first few weeks, I almost expected her to come barreling into the room at any given moment, pulling the impossible out from her ass and wielding it like a stake as she declared, “That’s my vampire!”

I was her vampire. Or at least I was her vampire.

But my hopes were not met.

I should have known better considering who she had chosen to use the Cluviel Dor on. The same one with whom she now chose to share her bed. Her life. And when that realization finally sunk in, I attempted to fuck her from my mind, using any and every one of the donors who pandered to my new wife.

I viewed it as killing two birds with one stone.

But it only took my first week long play date for my mind to go running back home. To seek solace from my memories of Sookie. And now that I had some distance from it – from her – I could see why it all fell apart. I could recall each and every misstep each of us took. But even if we had made all the right moves, ultimately we were destined to fail.

I never accepted Sookie was just a human and Sookie never accepted she was anything but. She never accepted her place in the supernatural world she was undoubtedly a part of. And it wasn’t just the vampire shit she didn’t want to deal with. She was the great-granddaughter of the Prince of the Sky Fae. He’d told her himself she had been born with their essential spark. She was always a part of the supernatural world before Bill had ever been sent for her. Before Hadley had run her mouth to Sophie-Anne.

Before any vampire shit landed on her doorstep, Sookie Stackhouse was already one of us.

But her mind refused to acknowledge it. Refused to accept her status as ‘other’ and she continued to color in the box marked ‘human’ until her pen had worn through the paper.

I could accept that she didn’t want to be turned. I hated it, but I could accept it. It wasn’t a life I would have chosen if I had been given the choice, but that didn’t mean I hadn’t come to appreciate my new life. She too could have found joy in making new discoveries. In witnessing lifetime after lifetime of the advancements in technology. To see for herself the progression of her beloved humanity.

But it would seem the thought never even crossed her closed mind. I only wished I’d had more time to try to convince her otherwise.

Now though, I would leave her be. She’d made her choice and that choice hadn’t been me. But I would still see to it that she would remain free, so once I took Oklahoma I would make a move on Nevada. I wanted nothing to do with the state and would leave it to rot. But taking out Felipe would be the only way for me to acquire Louisiana and my only concern was Louisiana.

Because all of my concerns were in Louisiana.

Freyda came to stand before me and jerked my head upright, looking into my eyes for the truth of my words.

Unable to see her own demise behind them taking form in my mind.

“You will protect me and mine from all who threaten us?” she asked.

“Yes,” I replied truthfully.

I would allow no other to take her head. That pleasure would be mine.

My honesty – sans treasonous designs – appeared to be good enough for her for now. She even looked somewhat pleased when she turned to her second and said, “See to it that he’s cleaned up and given donors. He’s already missed court too often and I want him healed by tomorrow night so he can join me.”

“Yes, Your Majesty,” her lackey bowed.

He would be my second as well.

My second target.

“Who are you loyal to, Eric?” she asked in an almost singsong voice as an afterthought. The way she strode towards the door gave the impression she was damn near joyful.

I couldn’t have that.

So I gave her another truth and replied, “Sookie,” tugging on my invisible chains once more and making both Freyda’s elation and her exit from the room come to a halt.

But I couldn’t have Sookie, so I wouldn’t let Freyda have her delight.

Nor would I let her think she had broken me that easily.

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33 comments on “Chapter 2 – Madness

  1. ljhjelm says:

    Sookie is going to be so sad when she hears what the Queen has done to Eric.

  2. MsStitcher says:

    I have complete faith in you to do justice to our two favourite characters, or what’s left of them anyway 🙂

  3. gallega97 says:

    Wow…I can’t imagine what it will be like for Sookie to find out how Eric has lived his year. Looking forward to more.

  4. Judy says:

    Wow. I feel so bad for Eric but I thought you wrote him so well. His pragmatism, will power, determination, justice, and even his sense of humor were all present for us. Thank you for writing him IN CHARACTER.

    I’m so glad he didn’t give that bitch any sense of satisfaction. The memories of him & Sookie were great too. It was nice to be reminded about what I did like about the books, after being faced with the craptastic ending.

    Best line of the chapter: (So perhaps my first order of business as king would be to have Compton brought before me so I could stake his antebellum ass.) Haha!

    Happy Birthday!

  5. Oh. My. Awesome. Applesauce! The exquisite angst is crazy! Of course, my love of Eric knows no bounds. Eric is as loyal as he can be even though he is no longer with Sookie. The heart longs for its desire…

  6. christicdc says:

    Sookie is going to be so upset when she finds out how Eric has lived for a year. I can take this kind of angst. Good chapter it will make the story very interesting. Poor Eric! I can’t wait for your next chapter!

  7. antaresis says:

    I haven’t read it yet, but I’m confident that anything you write will be better than all the crap in DEA.

  8. treewitch703 says:

    Oh, myyyyyy. All the might have beens. What incredible grit Eric has. C’mon, Sookie girl, do your thing.

  9. OposKneg says:

    Thank you. No download from CH for me yesterday. I read The 5th Wave…Great read! I can see it becoming a movie and following the book! ha!

  10. Mindy says:

    I’m so glad you are writing this story. I’m glad Eric is holding on. I hope he will hear info that Sookie moved on from Sam and this will give him hope. I like how he is playing head games with the Queen. I can’t wait until she meets her end.

  11. Cari says:

    Sookie is going to be frantic. Psychic? That’s interesting. Go on. Revenge s*x? Predictable. When you are being tortured, you go with your mind where you are safer.

  12. estrella75 says:

    TIMOROUS CUNT! WIN!

  13. duckbutt60 says:

    Ah….I teared up as Eric remembered some of the best lines in the books —lines that started to stitch their hearts together –before the asshat Maker tore them apart.

    Oh yes, Appius taught him well —Fredya doesn’t know who she’s dealing with –if she did, she’d leave him chained up all the time –because he won’t be of use to her like she thinks. What is she, 150 years old? She reminds me of a know-it-all tween —yup, she’s got the “big dog” chained now….but once he’s off the leash….yowzers…..

    Thanks for standing in the breech, dear KJ!
    Pat

  14. Mia says:

    Love it, couldn’t bring myself to read DEA but am loving this. Please please update soon

  15. kleannhouse says:

    thanks for the chapter… i do not feel sorry for Fredya in the least, her commuppance is coming and i am looking forward to it. When Sookie does show up he is going to think it is a dream but i am looking forward to that too… Kristie

  16. Gwynwyvar says:

    It’s like a chihuahua trying to beat a great mastiff into submission. Please. She should be smarter than that, but I guess pride makes fools of us all!

    I was almost crying listening to Eric’s hallucinations. I knew he was under torture, and knowing that Sookie was his solace was heart-breaking. Not much longer Eric. Sookie will come!

  17. Heather218 says:

    I loved it!! I hope Sookie can use her fairy status to overrule the Queen and take Eric back…or just show up and stake that bitch like she did with Lorena!!!

  18. Loftin says:

    I can’t wait for the cunt to get her very own come to Jesus from both Sookie and Eric. Great chapter!

  19. valady1 says:

    The idea of a “child” queen thinking she can defeat a 1,000 year Viking is almost amusing. She must be deluded. Eric’s use of his memories of Sookie (both good and bad) to deal with the torture and distance himself from it seems so in character. And again, thank you for writing this story so quickly after Black Tuesday or the day the SVM world died.

  20. I have to slightly disagree with ljhjelm, I don’t think sookie will be sad (ok maybe for a sec) no she will be pissed!!!!! Can’t wait for more, keep up the great work.

  21. luvvamps says:

    I’m an angst whore from way back and this chapter had me in tears. He loves her so! CH should be ashamed of herself for what she has done to them. You, great one, are going to give them the HEA that they deserve.

  22. pk22477 says:

    This was such an awesome chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Hope Sookie nails her to the wall!

  23. theladykt says:

    Excellent chapter….Unfortunately its probably what would happen. I for one don’t think Creepy Felipe or the other states that know about her would leave her be…. or Hunter….. or any puppies she may have

  24. ericluver says:

    Loved it. I feel so sad for Eric…but he’s going to get his revenge, one way or the other. I don’t think Felipe or the other vampires will leave Sookie alone either. One year? That’s all she has, as far as I’m concerned. Then it’ll be first in, first served. Sam doesn’t stand a chance of protecting her or any puppies they might have…although I hope they don’t have any…maybe that’s mean…but who cares!
    Dying to see what happens next 🙂

  25. baronessjai says:

    Damn don’t give up…Eric .ole Sookie is coming for her VAMPIRE! I can’t wait for more 😉

  26. judy says:

    I am waiting for you to make this right. At least you have some idea of the rules of the world of vamps, 1000 year vs 150? my money is on Eric showing her a thing or two, and Sookie needs to get back to her fighting self instead of hiding.

  27. tyesmamaw says:

    I LOVE this story I haven’t read DEA nor do I plan to I feel so sorry for Eric can’t wait for Sookie to bring her badself after her Vampire!!! The count chocula comment was hilarious.

  28. ericplenty says:

    Thank you for fixing the ending to my fav books ,CH broke my heart and this story seems to be my B and J ice cream. Can’t wait for Sookie to live up to her character!

  29. Hayat says:

    I’m getting over CH’s cruelty with every word you writ. My day is starting to seem brighter already! Thank you!

  30. Oh god, it just broke my heart to read Eric’s thoughts about expecting her to show up and save him in the early weeks, claiming him as hers. That’s something he always wanted – for her to claim him – and it was obvious that he was hurt by her standoffishness and by her denial of their marriage.

    I’m very interested to see what you come up with for her rescue plan. I sort of fantasized about her finally coming in to her fae powers and walking in to the throne room all badass, finally claiming Eric and killing Freyda in the confrontation, all glowy and powerful. I also thought about her making some deal with Niall either because he owed her after the fairy war or by promising to produce a child he could spirit away.

    I also thought about her finally agreeing to be turned by one of Eric’s children and then that activating her fae powers so she went in all bad ass – maybe some kind of damphyr or something.

    Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

  31. itsamia71 says:

    This was sad and beautifully written. ‘We are broken together.’ So true.

  32. *swipes at damp cheeks and coughs softly* wow, that was awesome. x

  33. hartvixen123 says:

    What a great chapter. The torture was horrible but you wrote Eric so well that I felt like I was feeling everything that he felt. So sad. I’m loving this story!

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